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10-09-2003, 10:55 PM | #1 |
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a happy one (kinda)
a kinda happy one i guess, hope ya like it
Life I Wont Miss visions of the past still fading away still hearing echos of things I didn’t say I see all of this and sit awhile to rest feeling some of these burdens free from my chest but with all of these things now taking place scars of my past still show on my face my load has been lightened but is not yet free wounds iv created still are killing me the light now shines as I thought it never would but things still killing like I don’t think they should they will never go away for they lives on in my mind still wishing so hard that id left them behinde but I cant ask for more, lord god iv gained all this Iv escaped all that life, a life I wont miss |
10-09-2003, 11:00 PM | #2 |
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Very nice creedguy
I liked it a lot:P
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10-10-2003, 10:47 AM | #3 |
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nice poem! I liked it!
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10-11-2003, 06:59 AM | #4 |
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that's a good 1
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11-02-2003, 01:23 AM | #5 |
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this is awesome, I really like!
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11-02-2003, 10:10 AM | #6 |
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Aint No future past in the past creedguy16....it was good well written.....your go boy........peace
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