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Spread My Wings
Staring in the sky, I get to wandering
Where am i going, where is my motivation? Well, here I am again wandering things that i cant comprehend So I smoke all day and drink all night Hoping the pain will go away Tell me, when no hopes left Where can we go... (chorus) Please, I lost all my reason I lost all my soul I need you to help me gain control (end) Staring in the ocean, I get to wandering Have i met the end, Is this the great voyage? I laugh at myself again cause ive been wandering things i cant understand So i drive all day and cry all night Cutting the pain away Tell me, when no hopes left Where can we go... (chrous) Please, I lost all my reason I lost all my soul I need you to help me gain control All of my loves in you to spread my wings Please, I've dropped all my deamons I've gained control I understand now please, save my soul (end) .................................................. .......... im no to sure about this one. " understand" is supposed to be the same line as the on above it, but there wasent enough room.
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03-29-2006, 11:35 PM
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 that was really uplifting THE SUN, goes down the blues come around the choice, is black in white its headache tommorow and heartache tonite, haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa song in my head there your poem reflectied i liked it and the laugh at myself part
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03-30-2006, 04:27 PM
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thank u
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Your Welcome
 Good Potery Indeed
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03-31-2006, 11:43 PM
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indeed
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i wish more people commented on my poem. oh well,...
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i know it
could have left theme speachless~ mabey thats why they did,nt comment But Oh Well ~
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yeah, somthing tells me most of the users dont come to the waxing poetica section
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i like it, no doubt about that.
Maybe you should work on how your words flow, its a bit jagged here and there, but nevertheless its good. |
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k, i defenetly will look at them again. thanks.
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