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04-08-2005, 05:14 AM | #1 |
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Failing Me
I took a walk to the bottom of the hill the other day
Such an empty search for my sanity I looked over the distance to where I last felt peace And begged to the heavens for serenity [Chorus] All I got was eptiness Failing me once again Trust so strong But let down hard Everything I thought was real Another empty search Another empty search A little white lie in the sky I traveled down the road many have traveled before Another empty search for my soul I whispered into the dark, for just one spark of hope The darkness leaving me so unfulfilled (Chorus) I need a chance at life again A chance to live, to breathe on my own I want to change my life around But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know
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04-08-2005, 09:24 AM | #2 |
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a very "searching" piece...may you find what you are looking for and get what you deserve.
Does it have a title?
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04-08-2005, 10:48 AM | #3 |
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its called Failing Me
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04-08-2005, 12:02 PM | #4 |
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....begged to the heavens...i liked that line....
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that was really good!
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04-10-2005, 08:52 PM | #6 |
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Wow, very cool!
That last line is a killer: I want to change my life around But its so hard, when you fall on the only road you know
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