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Old 11-29-2005, 08:05 PM   #1
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some of my none rhyming poems...

If God Decided To Pick Apart The Angels Wings (version 2)

I'm in love with an angel
She has a broken halo, her wings picked apart
Her poetry is written with her arm and a razor
Traditional in the sense that she is in pain
Crippled and bleeding, this angel of mine
Cold and hardly breathing, this angel of mine
Watch her cry herself to sleep
Unmasked and undone
To rise to the dawn as if the sun never slept and will never rise
I can only stand aside and watch her die for so long.


Crafted Hands

from crafted hands
build, mold, shape
kill, destroy, rape
the freedom that has molded you
and put air in your lungs
to voice an option better left
unsung, void, said
cold, helpless, dead
from a memory forced and removed
a little to the right side of wrong
everytime the sun does not
shine, rise, awaken
shiver, tremble, shaken
into a memory forced upon
by crafted hands.

Awaken To The Reality of My Dreams

I'm having dreams or so it seems
But they are more like nightmares
The world is dying and no one cares
I'm writing the end with paper and a pen
Look back now or never look at all
You'll fall through these dreams
You'll burn through the fire
I'll burn with you, watch me burn
Gasoline fills my lungs
I'm choking on broken glass
Left crippled for forever
Breathe for me.

Removed From My Happy Ending

On broken wings, I watched you fall through
Fragile hands that found the time to break through the space
Between me and this emptiness
Where my mind fails me and this darkness is known as friend
Until the end, suffocate and humiliate
Dissconected from what I knew as life

My happy ending ended when you fell from view.

The Death of Me

All communication has been ceased
Our eyes give a glance and shows the ugliness
That lies inside
Physically disconnected
Emotionally withdrawn
Your lack of understanding will be the death of me.

Heartless

Heart in my hands, outstretched
You have blood on your sleeve
Walking around, my heart hits the ground
Does anyone care...does anyone care
I could pick it up off the floor
But I don't think I care anymore
But just like you
I'll carry on, heartless and cold.

Killing Today For A Better Tomorrow

At the hands of me, a mass tragedy
And the hatred we choked down and swallowed
Was better spent on wasted tears
Now all that remains has been taken away
And all I'm left begging for are the words I couldn't say

Forgiveness, what a slaughter house you've made
What a road you've paved
Leading straight into the arms of oblivion

This is the end, this is the mass tragdey, and the sky
And it's falling faster than we can question the reasons why
Tear down your walls or captivate us with your lies
But it's like this...it ends like this...everything dies
Your soul wasn't something you could trade
In the most beautiful way, we will fade

Trust this and know
You could leave us choking on our tongues
And with our final breath
Still, we would beg for acceptance
And the comfort of your ever damning arms.
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Giving shame to my name
Am I no better forgiven
If I leave this world the same.
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Old 11-29-2005, 11:44 PM   #2
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those were some of my faves kev
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