Love of the Knife

MrSeeker · 02-06-2004, 03:25 AM

I just wrote this seconds ago along with "Chaos".

"I wish I could touch the sky and start to fly
I wish I could breath,but Im about to leave
I can feel it coming, soon to be the ending
The ending of it all, now I begin to fall

The ending of this chapter,the ending of my life
The ending to the twisted chapter entitled "Love of The Knife"

As I fall to my death,I close my eyes and hold my breath
I think of things I should have done, I should have loved You and accepted Your Son
I only thought of me, but that could never set me free
I sinned my whole broken life,I cursed my friends and beat my wife

The ending of this chapter,the ending of my life
The ending to the twisted chapter entitled "Love of The Knife"

The end is coming closer now
Im so lost and I dont know how
How I ever ended up this way
I had my fun,but now I have to pay
We have to pay for these choices we make
We cant live for ourselves and take take take
All the things I've done,no one knows
But my time is up,this chapter is finally closed

A new chapter to begin,I have somthing brand new within
Something I never felt before,somthing that has me begging for more
I have a new hope pushing me on, carrying me through and keeping me strong
I now have the hope that You will be there for me,when I am weak and cannot walk you will carry me"

Hope ya like it!

I tricked ya,I tricked ya!!! You probly thought this would be some suicidal writing,but its not,hehe.

SleeplessAngel · 02-06-2004, 03:29 AM

I love that one!

MrSeeker · 02-06-2004, 04:00 AM

Thanks alot

Torn Signs · 02-06-2004, 08:54 AM

This is awesome. I like it a bit more then Chaos because of the ending. It's surprising and it's interesting how the narrator has found some hope. The end of a chapter, it's actually a positive view to look upon. Congrats.

creedsister · 02-06-2004, 11:25 AM

Hey seeks i loved that on~~this is the verse i love the most~~Something I never Felt Before something That has me begging For Me~~FIRE that rocked!!!

MrSeeker · 02-06-2004, 07:01 PM

Thank alot you two

Dogstar · 02-07-2004, 12:26 PM

Very nice, MrSeeker! Kind of out with old and in with the new.

MrSeeker · 02-07-2004, 04:12 PM

Thanks

archie bunker · 02-16-2004, 12:36 AM

i loved the whole spouse beating thing great job

MrSeeker · 02-16-2004, 12:55 AM

Thanks

creedsister · 02-16-2004, 02:29 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by archie bunker) i loved the whole spouse beating thing great job

SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL haha

archie bunker · 02-16-2004, 11:53 AM

Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL haha

THANK YOU

THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!

creedsister · 02-16-2004, 12:47 PM

were are you!!!!

MrSeeker · 02-16-2004, 06:29 PM

Im right here. why?

JulieCitySlicker · 02-16-2004, 08:28 PM

I liked it Kevin

I would've responded earlier but I havn't looked in here for a while

02-06-2004, 11:25 AM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Hey seeks i loved that on~~this is the verse i love the most~~Something I never Felt Before something That has me begging For Me~~FIRE that rocked!!! __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-07-2004, 12:26 PM	#7
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Very nice, MrSeeker! Kind of out with old and in with the new. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

02-16-2004, 12:36 AM	#9
archie bunker USER INFO » Status: Naked Toddler Posts: 235 Joined: Jan 2004 Currently: Offline	i loved the whole spouse beating thing great job __________________ life hands you shit make shit salad

02-16-2004, 02:29 AM	#11
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by archie bunker) i loved the whole spouse beating thing great job SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL haha __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-16-2004, 11:53 AM	#12
archie bunker USER INFO » Status: Naked Toddler Posts: 235 Joined: Jan 2004 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) SICKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL haha THANK YOU THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!! __________________ life hands you shit make shit salad

02-16-2004, 12:47 PM	#13
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	were are you!!!! __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-16-2004, 08:28 PM	#15
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,309 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	I liked it Kevin I would've responded earlier but I havn't looked in here for a while __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

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