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Old 04-15-2005, 04:07 PM   #1
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Sisters tears

For the very first time...
Tonight...
I saw my baby sister cry...
At that one moment...
It broke me all up inside...
First time seeing all that pain and fear...
In her innocent eyes...
All I could say was...
The worlds cruel...
Not being able to take all the pain away...
Hurt like fire...
Buring me quickly to the ground...
Oh little sister its ok...
How can I make it better...
knowing the answer is nothing...
I cry with her tonight...
For her heart has been torn...
To peices mine has as well...
At that moment when she cried...
Something in me wanted to stike out and
hurt the thing that caused so much...
This world cant take a hint...
The saddeness visible in her eyes...
holding her tight...
Everythings going to be allright...
I with you tonight...
As she feel asleep on my lap...
Her eyes red and puffy...
Slowly healing...
I will always be here for her...
My baby sister should never cry...
Whoever or whatever has done this...
Should pay the price...
Dont they know what they've done...
Baby sister dont you cry...
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With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 04-15-2005, 09:58 PM   #2
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Such A Sweet Lit Poem
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-16-2005, 10:40 AM   #3
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awwww...big sis to the rescue...sweet...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-16-2005, 01:12 PM   #4
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aw that was really nice.
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 04-16-2005, 07:54 PM   #5
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thanx yall!
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