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Old 12-22-2004, 12:57 AM   #1
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I Can Honestly Say

A couple of funny moments but I'ld admit this is a pretty sappy one. No-one to say this to yet and i'm not 26 but well one day.......

As I breath my last
Memories rush through me
Haven't felt this senstation
Since the doctor told me to stop using viagra

My life has being full to the cup
Look back fondly to the days of the old school yard
Also recall travel, hard work, money gained and the next generation spawned

A greater acheivement then these is that
I can honestly say you are a greater woman today
Then when we both said for richer or poorer
Not in spite of me but because
I became the man I always should have been

It doesn't matter to me that i've leaving behind my wealth
Or that we started this journey poorer than poor
Or even love that your boobies drop to the floor

Tis not love's going hurts my days
But that it went in little ways
Travelled to Venus and in the end
I'm glad I understand your ways

You were fair and young
And though the rose has faded
It matters not to me

So the big day is tommorrow
And i'm already twenty-six
I hope I can honestly say the above some day
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Old 12-22-2004, 01:02 AM   #2
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LMAO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAaa
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Old 12-22-2004, 01:21 AM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) LMAO HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAaa

why thanks i espescially enjoy the boobies line but boob jokes are always funny! there is a more serious point though........
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Old 12-22-2004, 01:12 PM   #4
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HAAAAAAAAAA Oh I Know It I could read the serious stuff, But Still LMAO....And The Boobies Thats A Damn Scary Thought For A Chick I Thank God For Mine And That Keeps Him Like Rocks, HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AA
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Old 12-23-2004, 06:58 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by aussiecreeder) Haven't felt this senstation
Since the doctor told me to stop using viagra
LOL

Quote: (Originally Posted by aussiecreeder) A greater acheivement then these is that
I can honestly say you are a greater woman today
Then when we both said for richer or poorer
Not in spite of me but because
I became the man I always should have been
Wow, that's quite good!

Verry cool!! Do you have any more songs that you have written?
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Old 12-23-2004, 07:37 PM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by - hayley -) LOL


Wow, that's quite good!

Verry cool!! Do you have any more songs that you have written?

i've written other stuff that i've posted here.....i like the boob line myself lol.
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Old 12-23-2004, 09:48 PM   #7
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Why doesn't that suprise me?

I'll go try to find your other stuff now
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After the flood all the colours came out.'

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Old 12-23-2004, 11:12 PM   #8
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Quote: (Originally Posted by - hayley -) Why doesn't that suprise me?

I'll go try to find your other stuff now

hey i'm a guy and its not my fault if i was breast-fed until i was five! lmao j/k
oh cool....i saw an old one was bumped up.
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Old 01-02-2005, 12:24 AM   #9
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5? Wow, that is a long time, no wonder why you're a late bloomer!! Just kidding lol
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Old 01-02-2005, 12:45 AM   #10
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stop making fun of me.......lol
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Old 01-02-2005, 02:09 AM   #11
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Awww I'm sorry

Don't cry!

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See the land of the long white cloud
Cape Reinga, to the fiords in the south.
Harbour lights in the City of Sails
Aroha, the love that never fails
See the bird with the leaf in her mouth
After the flood all the colours came out.'

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