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Old 05-22-2008, 05:22 AM   #1
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Old 05-24-2008, 11:24 PM   #2
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its always interesting to hear how other countrys celebrate their holidays WE JUST GET DRUNK AND BE SOMEBODY here in the good old usa and make resoloutions we never keep HELLO but i on the other hand am not apart percent of that majortiy i like these lines in your poem So Stop Your Regrets And LEAVE THEME BEHIND TO MUCH IS JUST A WASTE OF TIME So Stop the bullshit thoughts THAT ONLY KEEP YOU DOWN Good Job liked it
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Finaldecision) My Amend

It‘s two a clock on a midday morning
The sparkling wine is long metabolized
Watching out my big window grate
Seems like a dull, frosty new year‘s day

And I am sorry
Didn‘t pack up my stuff
Currently don‘t want to come
Just don‘t feel ready now

Brawly fireworks emblazed the sky
But today we pick up the waste outside
Sometimes we tend to overlook
The good things for what they have been

And I am sorry
Didn‘t pack up my stuff
Currently don‘t want to come
Just don‘t feel ready now

So stop your regrets
And leave them behind
Too much is just a waste of time
So stop that bullshit thoughts
That only keep you down
‚Cause New Year‘s Day is warm tonight!

So it is allright
Going to pack up my stuff
The time has come to go
I‘m feeling ready now



(In Germany we drink sparkling wine and launch fireworks between New Year's Eve and New Year's Day.)
yes indeed now that i review this piece of potery, it could have reached deeper point of views, but still my friend worth reviewing ..... peace be with us in jesus name blessings and strengeth, its been a struggling year already to get caught up, for us all A BIG GOD BLESS YA,
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