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Old 03-15-2005, 05:19 PM   #1
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lost in a illusion

The mirrors taunt me.
Not knowing who I am haunts me.
Draining whatever was left of myself.
Searching everywhere.
I couldn't have just disappered.
Or have I done just that.
Letting the world take so much from me.
I couldnt stop what was going on.
It did as it pleased.
But now lost in illusions.
Of who I used to be and of what Im to become.
I fear I've lost the better me.
Or all of me.
Longing to look in the mirrors....
and see my face...
Not the distint looking eyes I keep.
Still gone.
Invisible to me.
The person I see isn't me.
Pages of my life now blank...
Wasting time.
My search never ending.
Purpose and meaning thoughts echo.
I cant find myself.
I dont know who I am.
Lost in this illusion.
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...

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Old 03-15-2005, 06:02 PM   #2
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Mirrors can answer a lot of questions, or for that matter raise a million more...nicely written, HR2004...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing

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Old 03-15-2005, 11:01 PM   #3
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Like Wow*** that was darn good
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 03-16-2005, 01:37 PM   #4
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thanks glad you liked it!
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i did it was like Wow Your Welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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