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Old 07-17-2005, 10:39 AM   #1
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Those Eyes

I swear I'm not this bleak lol but this is what came out for whatever reason......

Little boy starting at me
With big eyes so blue
Those eyes shall soon match your mood

You'll give up looking for the "one"
And marry the first one that comes along
Sure she's beautiful now
But just wait to she places a ring on your finger
And she lets herself go
Karma Sutra you'll be a master
But forget how to make love

You'll work your ass off
Earn two degrees
Only to find yourself with a job and boss you depise
Hating every second just to feed your kids and wife

You'll get somewhere, buy a house or two
One of the kids hit college and perhaps things aren't so bad after all
One day you'll find her with the pizza delivery man
And break your heart in two

She'll take you for half your worth
And take those kids
You love more than life itself
If you're lucky you'll see them on weekends

Child support will fund your wife's loser husband
His three kids
You'll die a lonely man
Your inheritance spent on your daughter's husband
With no job who placed that bruise on her eye

What are you waiting for?
A happy ending?
This is not Hollywood son
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Wings for Marie

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Old 07-17-2005, 04:04 PM   #2
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thats the truth so help me Lord ... beautiful insparation SO PRECIOUS DIVINE
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 07-17-2005, 08:10 PM   #3
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May not be hollywood, son...but in REAL LIFE we can change the script, nothing's written in stone...just takes a little longer to rewrite...

excellent observation piece...enjoyed reading it...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 07-18-2005, 02:17 AM   #4
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Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa:d
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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