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12-30-2003, 02:37 AM | #1 |
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Goin' Home
Thinking about thoughts of ending a life
God I know, I know it wasn't right I pleaded for help, why would they've listened My problems, they wouldn't get 'em Understanding, it's not what you think To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause First you must BE Now, my friend, why can't you see Me, I'm not who you think For you know only my outside So now This is the day, this is that night My days will end, goodbye my friend I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold Now I must leave To a better place of everlasting life How is the end? What will I see? To be blind by light Or the rest of my life? You've been good to me, but all else have left I wish you no pain, 'cause you're better than that Someday we'll meet again, my dear friend Now I do this, I'm ready to leave Don't be sad, 'cause I'm goin' home Away from what I can't endure I say This is the day, this is that night My days will end, goodbye my friend I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold Now I must leave To a better place of everlasting life I said This is the day, this is that night Our days will end, come home my friend Someday we'll leave To a better place of everlasting life I'm goin' away, my day has come Don't try n' stop my, 'cause I'm ready for home You can't stop me, 'cause I'm goin' home It's not the best, but oh well. Is it okay, or bad?
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12-30-2003, 06:58 PM | #2 |
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very Intriging~~saxon
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12-31-2003, 02:24 AM | #3 |
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Thanks, it's not that good though. I think I've got a writers block or something....
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No, it's not bad, it's very cool! I love this part:
Understanding, it's not what you think To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause First you must BE
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Kinda funny, cuz I thought it was corny! Oh well, most of it was. It has meaning, it just came out in a wierd way.
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Keep on writing. It's not corny at all! You have some great observations and I like reading your stuff! Thanks for sharing!
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Oh yeah, I got a favor, kinda if someone is kind enough to help me out. I have a real good friend who isn't saved. I tried to get her to talk to someone from her church, but I think she's scared. I've sent her some verses, and tried to talk to her about it a few times, but she just kinda droped the subject. I know I should post this in faith/religion, but oh well. I don't know exactly what to do. I want to help her, I'm just having a little trouble. Is it possible someone knows some really good bible verses, song verses, anything that might help me?? I've got some Creed stuff I've thought about. And if someone has a poem or anything that might do some good, please pm me or something! Anything will help! I think she's avoiding God for some reason, I don't really understand why, but does anyone have any advice that I can give to her, or you can give to me so that I can help her a little better???
Thanks guys.............Saxon
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That was very good
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Thanks Julie!
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