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Old 05-24-2003, 02:12 AM   #1
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Another one

Hey everybody, here's another one of my poems:
don't know what to call it (I was thinking of Schizophrenia but it's too difficult, too medical):

(No Name)

"Hey how have you been?
-Bad, I feel I've committed the worst of all sins
-Why can I help?
-No my life is already hell.
-You can always tell me you know...
-Oh misery, I'm torn by my sorrow
Broken by an impossible desire
Sad by my cold fire...
-Don't let yourself down, don't forget I'm here
To the sky I'll make you reach
In the night you will live
To the world you'll never cringe
The one is with you my friend
'Cause for you, it's not the end.
-Then why do I feel this abominable way?
-It's just a crisis it happens everyday...
-To the world I have no appeal...
-So it's then I'll appear
-I feel like I have an incredible loss
-For everything there's a cause
The point is to find it and get it back
-Then I'll be complete, no more lacks?
-Seek and you shall find
'Cause this, it's not reality, it's all in your mind..."


If anyone has a name or a title for my poem, post it, I'll be really glad :P cause it's been driving me crazy for a while now....
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Old 05-24-2003, 12:45 PM   #2
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