To Mark Tremonti

[Hotdoggie]

Tremonti

You are torn
Wash away this peace
Move your fingers on the neck of SE
Seek and you'll find the mystery
Sing now man
Play now with it meanly
Move your mountains
Keep your hands upon the wheel
Keep focused
You are the meek who holds it all inside
You are with me
You are free
Not filthy
Love, don't be torn
Forgive yourself from all those prophecies
Forget about the thorns on your side
Sing your love song man
Let us hear your sweet lullaby
You are the peace inside us all
Keep on playing baby
You're a legend
You are a warrior
The freedom fighter
who doesn't have a reason
to hide from the bullets
of the Faceless Man
At my last breath I'll say
I love you Man

[goddess_bb]

Wow..

[PaulMcCoygirl]

That's good!

[HESTLA'S HONEY]

Hello,

Very well written!! I was mesmerized by the flow and imagery. Beautifully expressed poem!!

~Hestla's Honey~

[The Lithium]

Humm...Sounds a littel bitt like my "Creed Lyrics Medely"....But mine are MUCH longer!!

Acctully I think that my have a better story...

Here it is:
(Torn) Peace is what they tell me
Love am I unholy
Lies are what they tell me--
(Say I) Out forms this misconception we call man
But I don’t know him
No, I don’t know him
Because he lies--
(One) I feel angry I feel helpless
Want to change the world, yeah
I feel violent I feel alone
Don’t try and change my mind--
(What’s This Life For?) But they ain’t here anymore
Don’t have to settle the score
’Cause we all live
Under the reign of one king--
(Is This The End?) So look to the sky
He hold the keys for your life and mine--
(My Own Prison) So I cry out to God
Seeking only his decision
Gabriel stands and confirms
I’ve created my own prison--
(Weathered) So now I’m rusted and weathered
Barely holding together
I’m covered with skin that peels and
it just won’t heal--
(Wrong Way) And they all told me the wrong way
What if I died?
What did I give?
(What If?) What if you did?
What if you lied?
What if I avenge?
What if eye for an eye?--
(Who’s Got My Back?) So who’s got my back now?
When all we have left is deceptive
So disconnected
So what is the truth now?--
(Bound And Tied) Bound and tied,
Bound and tied
I’m bound and tied
I’m bound and tied--
(My Own) But I’m gona get out
So are you with me?--
(What If?) ’Cause we are one, we are strong
The more they hold us down the more we press on--
(Signs) So come with me I’m fading
Underneath the lights
Come with me
Come with me
Come with me now--
(Freedom Fighter) ’Cause I’m just a freedom fighter
No remorse
Raging on in holy war
Soon there’ll come a day
When you’re face to face with me
Face to face with me--
(Bullets) And hey all I want is what’s real
Something I touch and can feel
I’ll hold it close and never let it go
Said why... why do we live life
With all this hate inside
I’ll give it away ’cause I don’t want it no more
Please help me find a place
Somewhere far away I’ll go and you’ll never see me again--
(Beautiful) So close your eyes, here’s your surprise--
(Hide) Let’s leave…oh let’s get away
Get lost in time
Where there’s no reason to hide
Let’s leave…oh let’s get away
Run in fields of time
Where there’s no reason to hide--
(Don’t Stop Dacning) So am I hiding in the shadows?
Forget the pain and forget the sorrows
But I know I must go on
Although I hurt I must be strong
Because inside I know that many
Feel this way--
(Are You Ready?) So are you ready? Are you ready?
For what’s to come
All I say: ”Are you ready? Are you ready?”
For what’s to come--
(Inside Us All) ’Cause there’s a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on in the end
There’s a peace inside us all--
(Signs) And can’t you see them?
See the signs
You see them
All the signs we see them
Can’t you see them?--
(My Own) And if you see them
See the signs, do you see them?
So if you see them you know what we will do then
Come on, I see them, see the signs you see them
Let's get out, we already see the signs, we see them
(Higher) So let’s go there
Let’s make our escape
Come on, let’s go there
Let’s ask can we stay?
Can you take me higher?
To the place where blind men see
Can you take me higher?
To the place with golden streets--
(Stand Here With Me) ’Cause you stand here with me--
(My Sacrifice) And when you are with me
I’m free…I’m careless…I believe
Above all the others we’ll fly
This brings tears to my eyes
My sacrifice--
(Higher) So let's go there
Let's go there
Come on lets go there
Let ask can we stay?
Up high I feel like I’m alive for the very first time
Up high I’m strong enough to take these dreams
And make them mine--
(With Arms Wide Open) And when we get there
I’ll show you love
I’ll show you everything
With arms wide open
Under the sunlight
We’ll go to that place
I’ll show you everything
With arms wide open
Now everything has changed
I’ll show you love
I’ll show you everything
With arms wide open--
(Lullabay) And if there’s one thing I hope
I showed you
Hope I showed you
Just give love to all
I know there’s one thing that
You showed me
That you showed me
Just give love to all
Let’s give love to all--
(Torn) Lies are what they told me...

[Rune]

i was gonna say my jaw hit the floor when i saw how long that was.....but it kept going and it's still dropping lol

[Sheila63]

Great poem, Hotdoggie! It was very expressive and stirred up emotions in me, well done.

[StappsSaviour]

lithium, wot was the point of that?

[Hotdoggie]

thank u guys for ur opinions! i'm sorry i haven't written in a LONG time but i had to travel to see my mother and sister...
extreme lithium i just wanted to say that ur poem is actually bits and pieces of all the creed songs, it is true that i took some lyrics myself but it was only to amplify my passion for the creed songs.
So what i advise you to do is start writing how you feel about the creed songs instead of taking them entirely...
please don't take this the wrong way but it's just that you seem to have an inspiration, a gift for writing....

[SCOTTSMYMAN]

Cool poem Hotdoggie.

[JulieCitySlicker]

Quote:

Originally posted by StappsSaviour
lithium, wot was the point of that?

Thats what I was wondering


Great poem Hot doggie

[hotforscott]

That was a very good poem hotdoggie. Thank you for sharing.