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Old 12-13-2004, 03:48 AM   #1
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The Long Way Out

[[The Long Way Out]]

Standing here
Out in the open, the middle of nowhere
Blind to civilization
In the middle of my thoughts
This open terrain i traveled so much
My secret sanctuary

so crowded yet i stand alone
Longing for the moment
When I can test the waters of life
Sing for me wind
Show me what i've missed so much
I guess i should find the fire on my own
The passion, the world i miss so much

I stepped out of your world
And into my own
Cant find my way out
Even though ive been shown
These places
These thoughts a thousand times
Ive been shown what this is all about
Every exit is closed
So now im left to take the long way out

Breathing in the entoxicating air
Its laced with your memories
Slowly killing me
Making this world seem more like a nightmare
But the clouds open up
The last light of a dying earth
So centered
Sacrifice me for the sake of your god
Upon the altar i bleed
For humanity
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Old 12-13-2004, 08:36 AM   #2
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Old 12-13-2004, 01:40 PM   #3
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WOW....that one is really powerful...this part is just beautiful:
so crowded yet i stand alone
Longing for the moment
When I can test the waters of life
Sing for me wind
Show me what i've missed so much
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