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01-05-2004, 12:12 PM
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Garden of Pain
Suicidal thoughts seep through
your reality Dark colors of pain drip in your sky Waking up in empty sleep from dreams that don't exist Running down the path of nonethingness and lies Ashes to ashes Dust to dust May all that you believe in turn to rust Taste the sweetness of black water full of vile elements Wash down your bitter life with the branches of my trees Acrid smells of your disgust blow by in haste The palette of lifeless colors bleeding into your disease Ashes to ashes Dust to dust An eternity of death you can not trust
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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01-05-2004, 01:48 PM
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Wow that was amazing I really liked wakeing up in empty sleep from Dreams that dont exisit
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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01-05-2004, 01:54 PM
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and this line i liked best ASHES TO ASHES DUST TO DUST AN ETERNITY OF DEATH YOU CAN NOT TRUST}}killer
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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01-05-2004, 08:13 PM
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 Wow thanks for the kind words Creedsister.
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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01-05-2004, 08:33 PM
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Aww~~your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Yes, Linda! Awesome poem you go girl! So, glad to see you sharing more of your writings! Keep it up!
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01-05-2004, 11:49 PM
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yeah the line Dogstar liked I think is the best line of the song, and I think I see a bit of a Stapp influence there!
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yeah i see a lot of stapp influnence in a lot a people here
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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 Really?
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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