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Old 06-29-2005, 11:21 PM   #1
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Great feelings

The greatness too great...
The longing too strong...
The happiness too real...
Oh what I feel...
Wrapped in your arms...
The warmth too hot...
The time too short...
The passion too much...
Or just enough...
You look at me...
And all I can do is blush...
You gaze at me and all get lost...
The background no longer there...
Everyone else now a big blurr...
The noise that once sounded...
Now a silence echo's...
And trails all around...
Your eyes pleading...
No way to look away...
From you...
Never could tell you no...
Or ever say...
I didnt love you...
The darkness creeps...
But isn't strong enough...
To tear us apart...
When I start to get scared...
You quickly grab me...
Embrace and tell me its ok...
When tears flow down...
Your kisses wipe them away...
Like warm drops of heaven upon my cheeks...
Oh this great feeling...
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-30-2005, 12:04 AM   #2
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Amazing Writing...
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 06-30-2005, 12:24 PM   #3
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thanks!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-30-2005, 01:03 PM   #4
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beautiful...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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