Atilla

Ann Allusion · 05-10-2005, 11:35 PM

Attila

Over the Stepps
This warrior king rode
Songs of his battles
And bravery are told
By the sign of Mars sword
He was the one
Called the Scourge of God
Attila the Hun

Empires expand
So it will be
Before the hoard
The weaker will flee
Battles were fought
Battles were won
During the reign
Of Attila the Hun

Rome was afraid
Her emperor feared
Attila’s attack
Had been engineered
Towards ruling the West
A dying sun…
Would fall by the sword
Of Attila the Hun

The two forces clashed
Neither side a defeat
Rome and the Hun’s
Agreed to mutual retreat
The fight would be spared
For another day
Unaware that the Fates
Would not see it that way

For the love of a woman
A wedding was planned
Ilico’s heart filled with
Hate for this man
On their wedding bed
The murder was done
A battle for love…
Had brought down the Hun

Born of the Stepps…
On the Stepps he did die
His spirit rides free
On horseback he flies
Into the West
Towards setting sun
With a heart of a lion…
Attila the Hun.

©2005
Susan D.

HR2004 · 05-11-2005, 01:14 PM

that was awesome!

Ann Allusion · 05-11-2005, 08:59 PM

thank you, HR, glad you enjoyed reading it...

Dogstar · 05-16-2005, 08:06 PM

This made me think of Tennyson's Charge of the Light Brigade...nicely done, Ann, as always.

creedsister · 05-17-2005, 04:31 PM

That Rocked Cool great lit story Ann So Compact I loved it

Ann Allusion · 05-18-2005, 02:13 AM

dogstar and cs, thanks to you both...glad your enjoyed it...

creedsister · 05-18-2005, 01:48 PM

i did Ann it was awsome

05-10-2005, 11:35 PM	#1
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Attila Attila Over the Stepps This warrior king rode Songs of his battles And bravery are told By the sign of Mars sword He was the one Called the Scourge of God Attila the Hun Empires expand So it will be Before the hoard The weaker will flee Battles were fought Battles were won During the reign Of Attila the Hun Rome was afraid Her emperor feared Attila’s attack Had been engineered Towards ruling the West A dying sun… Would fall by the sword Of Attila the Hun The two forces clashed Neither side a defeat Rome and the Hun’s Agreed to mutual retreat The fight would be spared For another day Unaware that the Fates Would not see it that way For the love of a woman A wedding was planned Ilico’s heart filled with Hate for this man On their wedding bed The murder was done A battle for love… Had brought down the Hun Born of the Stepps… On the Stepps he did die His spirit rides free On horseback he flies Into the West Towards setting sun With a heart of a lion… Attila the Hun. ©2005 Susan D. __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing Last edited by Ann Allusion : 05-14-2005 at 10:43 PM.

05-11-2005, 01:14 PM	#2
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	that was awesome! __________________ Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds...

05-11-2005, 08:59 PM	#3
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	thank you, HR, glad you enjoyed reading it... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

05-16-2005, 08:06 PM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	This made me think of Tennyson's Charge of the Light Brigade...nicely done, Ann, as always. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

05-17-2005, 04:31 PM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	That Rocked Cool great lit story Ann So Compact I loved it __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

05-18-2005, 02:13 AM	#6
Ann Allusion USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 912 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	dogstar and cs, thanks to you both...glad your enjoyed it... __________________ In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing

05-18-2005, 01:48 PM	#7
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	i did Ann it was awsome __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

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