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07-13-2004, 12:30 PM
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If Time Stood Still
If Time Stood Still
If time stood still would you wait for me? In a field of flowers By an old oak tree…. Wind in your hair… Blowin’ wild and free Warmed by the sun Would you wait for me? If time stood still would you wait for me? Hold in your heart Old memories… Of times gone by And times to be See me in dreams… Would you wait for me? Would you move mountains Search endlessly Do you think you’d know me? See thru my transparencies If time stood still would you wait for me? Alas, it can’t That’s absurdity… Yet, Anything’s possible When we believe Miracles happen Would you wait for me? ©2004 Susan D. just one of those things that wrote it's self again...hope y'all enjoy...  ~peace |
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07-13-2004, 03:04 PM
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That was Soul touching Like A Quiet whisper Ann, Would you move , mountains search endlessly DO YOU THINK YOU,D KNOW ME THRU MY TRANSPARENCIES
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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07-14-2004, 02:47 AM
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thank you for reading, creedsister...sometimes more can be said with a whisper than with a shout...
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07-14-2004, 02:32 PM
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oh i know
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Love that one, Ann...this is my favorite part.
Would you move mountains Search endlessly Do you think you’d know me? See thru my transparencies I don't know if I'm on target with my little interpretation, but that verse makes me think of a bigger implication: Am I worthy? I like words that make me think.
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Very good poem Ann Allusion
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Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot |
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thank you for your kind replies and for reading this piece....glad y'all enjoyed it...
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awesome like it
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