Goin' Home

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-30-2003, 01:37 AM

Thinking about thoughts of ending a life
God I know, I know it wasn't right
I pleaded for help, why would they've listened
My problems, they wouldn't get 'em

Understanding, it's not what you think
To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause
First you must BE

Now, my friend, why can't you see
Me, I'm not who you think
For you know only my outside

So now
This is the day, this is that night
My days will end, goodbye my friend
I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold
Now I must leave
To a better place of everlasting life

How is the end?
What will I see?
To be blind by light
Or the rest of my life?

You've been good to me, but all else have left
I wish you no pain, 'cause you're better than that
Someday we'll meet again, my dear friend

Now I do this, I'm ready to leave
Don't be sad, 'cause I'm goin' home
Away from what I can't endure

I say
This is the day, this is that night
My days will end, goodbye my friend
I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold
Now I must leave
To a better place of everlasting life

I said
This is the day, this is that night
Our days will end, come home my friend
Someday we'll leave
To a better place of everlasting life

I'm goin' away, my day has come
Don't try n' stop my, 'cause I'm ready for home
You can't stop me, 'cause I'm goin' home

It's not the best, but oh well. Is it okay, or bad?

creedsister · 12-30-2003, 05:58 PM

very Intriging~~saxon

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-31-2003, 01:24 AM

Thanks, it's not that good though. I think I've got a writers block or something....

Dogstar · 12-31-2003, 01:28 AM

No, it's not bad, it's very cool! I love this part:

Understanding, it's not what you think
To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause
First you must BE

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-31-2003, 01:31 AM

Kinda funny, cuz I thought it was corny! Oh well, most of it was. It has meaning, it just came out in a wierd way.

Dogstar · 12-31-2003, 01:33 AM

Keep on writing. It's not corny at all! You have some great observations and I like reading your stuff! Thanks for sharing!

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-31-2003, 01:40 AM

Oh yeah, I got a favor, kinda if someone is kind enough to help me out. I have a real good friend who isn't saved. I tried to get her to talk to someone from her church, but I think she's scared. I've sent her some verses, and tried to talk to her about it a few times, but she just kinda droped the subject. I know I should post this in faith/religion, but oh well. I don't know exactly what to do. I want to help her, I'm just having a little trouble. Is it possible someone knows some really good bible verses, song verses, anything that might help me?? I've got some Creed stuff I've thought about. And if someone has a poem or anything that might do some good, please pm me or something! Anything will help! I think she's avoiding God for some reason, I don't really understand why, but does anyone have any advice that I can give to her, or you can give to me so that I can help her a little better???
Thanks guys.............Saxon

JulieCitySlicker · 12-31-2003, 03:10 AM

That was very good

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-31-2003, 03:03 PM

Thanks Julie!

12-30-2003, 01:37 AM	#1
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Goin' Home Thinking about thoughts of ending a life God I know, I know it wasn't right I pleaded for help, why would they've listened My problems, they wouldn't get 'em Understanding, it's not what you think To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause First you must BE Now, my friend, why can't you see Me, I'm not who you think For you know only my outside So now This is the day, this is that night My days will end, goodbye my friend I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold Now I must leave To a better place of everlasting life How is the end? What will I see? To be blind by light Or the rest of my life? You've been good to me, but all else have left I wish you no pain, 'cause you're better than that Someday we'll meet again, my dear friend Now I do this, I'm ready to leave Don't be sad, 'cause I'm goin' home Away from what I can't endure I say This is the day, this is that night My days will end, goodbye my friend I've seen the world, and oh it's so cold Now I must leave To a better place of everlasting life I said This is the day, this is that night Our days will end, come home my friend Someday we'll leave To a better place of everlasting life I'm goin' away, my day has come Don't try n' stop my, 'cause I'm ready for home You can't stop me, 'cause I'm goin' home It's not the best, but oh well. Is it okay, or bad? __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-30-2003, 05:58 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	very Intriging~~saxon __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-31-2003, 01:24 AM	#3
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Thanks, it's not that good though. I think I've got a writers block or something.... __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-31-2003, 01:28 AM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	No, it's not bad, it's very cool! I love this part: Understanding, it's not what you think To see is to beleive, but that's not true 'cause First you must BE __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-31-2003, 01:31 AM	#5
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Kinda funny, cuz I thought it was corny! Oh well, most of it was. It has meaning, it just came out in a wierd way. __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-31-2003, 01:33 AM	#6
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Keep on writing. It's not corny at all! You have some great observations and I like reading your stuff! Thanks for sharing! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

12-31-2003, 01:40 AM	#7
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Oh yeah, I got a favor, kinda if someone is kind enough to help me out. I have a real good friend who isn't saved. I tried to get her to talk to someone from her church, but I think she's scared. I've sent her some verses, and tried to talk to her about it a few times, but she just kinda droped the subject. I know I should post this in faith/religion, but oh well. I don't know exactly what to do. I want to help her, I'm just having a little trouble. Is it possible someone knows some really good bible verses, song verses, anything that might help me?? I've got some Creed stuff I've thought about. And if someone has a poem or anything that might do some good, please pm me or something! Anything will help! I think she's avoiding God for some reason, I don't really understand why, but does anyone have any advice that I can give to her, or you can give to me so that I can help her a little better??? Thanks guys.............Saxon __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-31-2003, 03:10 AM	#8
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,309 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was very good __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

12-31-2003, 03:03 PM	#9
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Thanks Julie! __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

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