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01-10-2004, 02:17 AM | #1 |
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Something Corrupt
"Right from the start I tore my flesh apart
Born into this world so cold and so dark Right from the start I cursed you Right from the start we both knew I was somthing corrupt Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up No,Im not giving in only to begin again Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go No,Im not letting go of what I know Im the horrid voice within your head Im the darkness that wants you dead Im the shadow that will consume you Im the past that will come back to haunt you Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up No,Im not giving in only to begin again Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go No,Im not letting go of what I know As the seconds become minutes As the days pass slowly by As the years become double digits Im afraid that you will have to die Im something corrupt,but Im not giving up No,Im not giving in only to begin again Im something corrupt,but Im not letting go No,Im not letting go of what I know ...Is true" Hope ya like it...its a newer one
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Very cool, MrSeeker. It has a Metallica feel to it, especially the part where it starts, I'm the horrid voice within your head!!
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Awesome!!! Thats what I was aiming for on it!!!
anywayz,i wish i would get dissed sometimes...im kinda tired of everyone saying how goodmy stuff is,but i guess its all good...haha Thanks
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Lmao!
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Well, I won't be dissing ya either, Mr. Seeker. It's a great poem. I love the ending, it wasn't what I was expecting.
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there it sucked does that make you feel better haha}to be honest out of the dark stuff you,ve written i really love this one,,it gives me a do or die vibe i like that STRONG} Words,,i liked im not letting go of what i know
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Well,thanks you two
HAHAHA
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your welcome
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You're welcome.
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Yet again you pull it off, good job and the vibe is the best part, awesome.
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thats right
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Thanks alot Kim!
Hey we dont chat much anymore,we need to chat more. Here's my email: [email protected] Please email me!!! I love hearing from you! Oh and all of you can check out my stuff together at my journal,which the link is in my sig,please check it out and post a comment telling me what ya think!
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