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Old 09-06-2006, 05:14 PM   #1
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A Joke Only Funny Enough To Be Followed By Gun Fire

A Joke Only Funny Enough To Be Followed By Gun Fire

All the laughter surrounded by a joke
Only funny enough to be followed by gun fire
With bullet shells encased in smoke
To feed upon their heartless desire

Our eyes lost their glow that day in the rain
Our words lost in translation, lost in the pain

Youthful spirits were drained of existence
In the classrooms they grew accustom to
Giving their lives with futile resistance
At the hands of someone they never even knew

Their bodies lay lifeless and incomplete
Their blood poured out beneath our feet

If only we could realize that the words we choose to say
Have such in impact to others, sometimes in the worst way.


- In loving memory of all those who were victims of school violence -
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Old 09-07-2006, 12:05 AM   #2
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Re: A Joke Only Funny Enough To Be Followed By Gun Fire

Hey Hey Man I Loved These Lines, OUR WORDS LOST IN TRANSLATION , LOST IN PAIN, Those Lines Would Have Worked Great In A Few Of Your Others Too just in case you did,nt notice
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Re: A Joke Only Funny Enough To Be Followed By Gun Fire

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Old 09-07-2006, 01:23 AM   #4
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Re: A Joke Only Funny Enough To Be Followed By Gun Fire

im so absent minded haaaaaaaaa, moderen day dance of the dead, i had to back and look at the title your welcome but see there how those lines fell in line perfectly with your other wrtings,
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