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10-23-2005, 05:14 PM | #1 |
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Tree Of Life
Tree Of Life
we have the word but do we understand we have been eating from the tree of knowledge of good and evil and now we are more free are we loved is my question 'cause we're afraid to leave behind the spirit of life we are small and afraid under these stormy skies will we understand the light we're given and how far we can get but we're unamazed in our ambition to bleed and succeed these words flow through me like a river it is eternity we are given if we could pluck the fruit we would live forever drinking from the fountain of youth there's so much time all the dreams unfullfilled so many things inside there's only death standing in our way can we break away from it's maze
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what a perfect well written prespective from the topic and direction of your poem damn impressive Wow*** such a perfect flavor i liked it
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Thanks so much
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