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Old 11-09-2003, 06:29 PM   #1
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This is an older one by me. As I continue to write new stuff, I figured I would bring out one of my older ones. This one is the first song I wrote, so it holds a special something for me. Now if I only had a band for my stuff.....

Sky is Falling

I opened my eyes one morning
all I found was a pale wall
there was not a sound
my skin began to crawl

the walls began to crumble
the roof was crashing down
it is time to get out
but there is nowhere to go

Chorus:
The sky is falling (Down on me)
the ground is breaking (right under my feet)
but you're always there, always there
always there with me


My world is falling apart
waves are crashing on me
i sink further down
but i just can't see


chorus (2)

you reached out, you saved me,
I don’t know what You ever saw in me
But you took the chance
You made me see (all that I was missing)

chorus

you never left my side
because you never hide
you ease my pain
my shelter from the rain



Its a little rough but like I said its an older one. Just want to know what you all think of it.
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Old 11-09-2003, 07:10 PM   #2
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Old 11-09-2003, 07:55 PM   #3
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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