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04-21-2004, 03:10 AM | #1 |
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Somthing new just for you!
The Hate Song
"I dont feel like myself,I havent for a while Havent shown some happiness or even a small smile Ever since you broke my heart in two I havent been able to stop thinking about you Im dried of tears, been crying too long Twisting myself apart because you're gone Kisses,they burn This lesson,I'll learn To never trust again Been burnt by my so called friend You're tearing apart my insides,Im trying to stay strong But you've been tearing me limb from limb all along I wish I could hold you to tell you how much I hate you I wish I could scold you just as bad as you did me too Hold you in my arms only to drop you to the ground Cover your lips only for you never to make another sound Hugs,they crush me Your beauty,so ugly The fire that still burned The lesson I never learned." New site: http://www.angelfire.com/punk4/writingsofinsanity I am Bleeding Love. Enjoy
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04-21-2004, 12:37 PM | #2 |
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I liked the first line
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
04-21-2004, 08:21 PM | #3 |
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Yea,sorry. This is my emo stuff coming out.(i hate emo!!!!) Better Off Dead,Released and some others are my harder roots,so stay tuned to the newsletter.
Later
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04-21-2004, 09:36 PM | #4 |
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I cant wait seeks
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05-01-2004, 12:16 AM | #5 |
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Cool man! I always like to read your poems. Really emotional.
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"...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp |
05-02-2004, 12:34 AM | #6 |
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Thanks
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