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06-13-2005, 12:33 AM | #1 |
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The pain
My prison...
My torment... My life... I walk outside... The rain falls as hard as it can... Mixing in with my tears... Making me go cold... The lighting strikes... Behind... The thunder shakes me... The pain so deep... Bleeding inside... Heart acheing... How could you do this to me... Wet... Falling in the puddles... Pushing me farther... Kicking me harder... Gasping loudly... Cant breathe... No air to retrieve... The hurting killing me... Fast... The last... Time I find... I look up towards the sky... Overcast and wet... laying down... On the wet ground... letting go of everything... My head falls back... Hits the hard earth... Everything starts spinning... There is no winning... In this prison... The pain finally killed me...
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06-13-2005, 02:47 PM | #2 |
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that was good
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
06-13-2005, 03:24 PM | #3 |
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that was "painful" to read...very good, though...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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Good writing HR2004
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06-14-2005, 11:17 AM | #5 |
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thanks you guys!
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