Night Waves

Aimee · 02-13-2004, 12:07 PM

By: Amy Aumick 2004

I float along
In my dream last night
I float away in the sea.
In water thick as night,
And black with fright,
I see you coming next to me.
You’re on your knees
Above me
You’re on your knees,
Calling out to set me free.
You say,
Come ride with me baby
You say,
Come take a ride with me
Within this raging sea
With me.
The waves sweep us up
Into maritime mystery.
No lighthouses illuminate
Our way.
It’s dark where I cannot see,
Salty sweet where I cannot breathe,
You’re here with me
Saying baby,
Come take a ride with me.
We’ll sail above
This raging sea.
Come take a ride with me,
Come inside with me.
Twisting in time
To your turbulent ways,
No safe harbor will I find.
Running away
From everything divine.
Drifting toward my isolation
Just to hear you say,
Come ride with me baby
You say,
Come take a ride with me
Within this raging sea
With me.

SCOTTSMYMAN · 02-13-2004, 06:00 PM

AWESOME Amiee!

I loved it!

creedsister · 02-13-2004, 08:21 PM

Aimee · 02-15-2004, 01:00 PM

Thanks. What did you like most about it? Do you think it was too repetitve?

creedsister · 02-15-2004, 04:00 PM

No i dont think it was like that at all to tell you the truth when i first read it } a song stuck in my head called: The anchor Holds} I found it very deep and some were erotic} i Always love your stuff Aim} YOU GOT IT GOING ON COME ON COME ON!!!!} I liked This line} Drifiting toward my isolation just to hear you say come ride with me within this raging sea""

Aimee · 02-16-2004, 09:47 AM

Thanks girl... I always appreciate your comments.

PS Who sings the song The Anchor?

creedsister · 02-16-2004, 07:57 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Thanks girl... I always appreciate your comments.

PS Who sings the song The Anchor?

to tell you the truth i dont know!! i just know the song well !!! it goes something Lke this""Ive Had Visons And ive had Dreams Ive even Held Theme In my hands but i never knew They would slip right through Like They were Only grades Of sand The anchor Hold Tho The ship shatterd I have falling upon my kness As i face the ragging Sea The anchor Holds Inspite Of the storm!!! Great Song And killer Poem Its just when i read it it was the first thing that poped in my head!!!

Dogstar · 02-21-2004, 08:42 PM

Amy, friggin AWESOME poem. WOW...I love the imagery.

02-13-2004, 12:07 PM	#1
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Night Waves By: Amy Aumick 2004 I float along In my dream last night I float away in the sea. In water thick as night, And black with fright, I see you coming next to me. You’re on your knees Above me You’re on your knees, Calling out to set me free. You say, Come ride with me baby You say, Come take a ride with me Within this raging sea With me. The waves sweep us up Into maritime mystery. No lighthouses illuminate Our way. It’s dark where I cannot see, Salty sweet where I cannot breathe, You’re here with me Saying baby, Come take a ride with me. We’ll sail above This raging sea. Come take a ride with me, Come inside with me. Twisting in time To your turbulent ways, No safe harbor will I find. Running away From everything divine. Drifting toward my isolation Just to hear you say, Come ride with me baby You say, Come take a ride with me Within this raging sea With me. __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

02-13-2004, 08:21 PM	#3
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Cool __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-15-2004, 01:00 PM	#4
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks. What did you like most about it? Do you think it was too repetitve? __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

02-15-2004, 04:00 PM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	No i dont think it was like that at all to tell you the truth when i first read it } a song stuck in my head called: The anchor Holds} I found it very deep and some were erotic} i Always love your stuff Aim} YOU GOT IT GOING ON COME ON COME ON!!!!} I liked This line} Drifiting toward my isolation just to hear you say come ride with me within this raging sea"" __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-16-2004, 09:47 AM	#6
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks girl... I always appreciate your comments. PS Who sings the song The Anchor? __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

02-16-2004, 07:57 PM	#7
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Thanks girl... I always appreciate your comments. PS Who sings the song The Anchor? to tell you the truth i dont know!! i just know the song well !!! it goes something Lke this""Ive Had Visons And ive had Dreams Ive even Held Theme In my hands but i never knew They would slip right through Like They were Only grades Of sand The anchor Hold Tho The ship shatterd I have falling upon my kness As i face the ragging Sea The anchor Holds Inspite Of the storm!!! Great Song And killer Poem Its just when i read it it was the first thing that poped in my head!!! __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

02-21-2004, 08:42 PM	#8
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Amy, friggin AWESOME poem. WOW...I love the imagery. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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