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03-04-2004, 11:33 AM | #1 |
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Twist the Knife
By: Amy Aumick 2004
A lover's pain inside of me A stinging gash I cannot see Touch me there Burn me Twist the knife Make me bleed Rise above you, take you in Laughing wildly as I sin Scratch me here I'm in Twist the knife Make it spin Meet you, leave you, doesn't take long Bind me, tie me, sing me your songs But I swear It's wrong Twist the knife We go on You will love me, I will hate you See it written above, it's true It's not fair Push through Twist the knife Kill my youth You taste it in your dreamless sleep My salty blood within will seep Leave me dear Don't weep Twist the knife Cut me deep |
03-04-2004, 02:20 PM | #2 |
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That was awesome!
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hey girl that was some deep stuff. it puts me in mind of a hopless relationship. that at one time i was inn...Twist the knife kill my youth. WOW. Man that hits home with me. its like somebody feeding off your blood. hopes dreams And spirt....oh i dont want to get on a roll hey girl YOU ROCK!!!
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Hopeless relationships...my forte! Thanks... Mr. Seeker, I thought you'd like it
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It definitely captures many many feelings, Amy!! Great work!
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AWESOME!!! I loved it Amy and feel I can relate to alot of what you were saying.
that's my favorite part!
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Very good! I liked it a lot Aimee
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Man, that rocked, Aimee.
This verse rules! You taste it in your dreamless sleep My salty blood within will seep Leave me dear Don't weep Twist the knife Cut me deep
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Thank you very much!!! I like it when y'all pinpoint your favorite parts. It's neat to see where each person stands.
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