the world

jbjfan · 05-29-2004, 01:52 PM

this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it...

"Whether you see the world either
cold and bitter,
or warm and fuzzy,
do you not notive the rest of the world,
do you not think of the people unknown?"

p.s. told you it was lame.....

Dogstar · 05-29-2004, 02:55 PM

Hmmm, I don't think it's lame. It says a lot in a few words. I think the speaker is telling someone to get his head out of his a** and stop being so self-absorbed. Maybe imploring the person to give a little and live a little and do what he can to make the world a better place. I think the speaker is trying to tell this person that the world doesn't revolve around him.

Just my 2 cents

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creedsister · 05-29-2004, 04:52 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by jbjfan) this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it...

"Whether you see the world either
cold and bitter,
or warm and fuzzy,
do you not notive the rest of the world,
do you not think of the people unknown?"

p.s. told you it was lame.....

I LOVED IT WHOOOOOO

Aimee · 05-29-2004, 10:16 PM

I don't think it's lame either. Sometimes the shortest poems say the most. And sometimes the longest poems say nothing at all.

jbjfan · 06-05-2004, 11:53 PM

i didnt mean the poem was lame. i meant that she was. she entered that poem in a c0ntest and it wasn't hers. and she got money for it. i havent respected her since. the poems pretty good though. i just feel bad for amy, she deserved the credit.

Aimee · 07-14-2004, 09:57 AM

Wow, that is lame. Unless you ask permission first of course

05-29-2004, 01:52 PM	#1
jbjfan USER INFO » Status: Misconception Posts: 89 Joined: Mar 2004 Currently: Offline	the world this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it... "Whether you see the world either cold and bitter, or warm and fuzzy, do you not notive the rest of the world, do you not think of the people unknown?" p.s. told you it was lame.....

05-29-2004, 02:55 PM	#2
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,348 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Hmmm, I don't think it's lame. It says a lot in a few words. I think the speaker is telling someone to get his head out of his a** and stop being so self-absorbed. Maybe imploring the person to give a little and live a little and do what he can to make the world a better place. I think the speaker is trying to tell this person that the world doesn't revolve around him. Just my 2 cents . __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

05-29-2004, 04:52 PM	#3
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by jbjfan) this is a poem that a friend of mine wrote im supposed to get an opinion about it for her. i dont think it's that great but im trying my best to stick with it... "Whether you see the world either cold and bitter, or warm and fuzzy, do you not notive the rest of the world, do you not think of the people unknown?" p.s. told you it was lame..... I LOVED IT WHOOOOOO __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

05-29-2004, 10:16 PM	#4
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	I don't think it's lame either. Sometimes the shortest poems say the most. And sometimes the longest poems say nothing at all. __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

07-14-2004, 09:57 AM	#6
Aimee USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 822 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Wow, that is lame. Unless you ask permission first of course __________________ The capacity for passion is both cruel and divine. George Sand - 1834

06-05-2004, 11:53 PM	#5
jbjfan USER INFO » Status: Misconception Posts: 89 Joined: Mar 2004 Currently: Offline	i didnt mean the poem was lame. i meant that she was. she entered that poem in a c0ntest and it wasn't hers. and she got money for it. i havent respected her since. the poems pretty good though. i just feel bad for amy, she deserved the credit.

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