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Clouds
Swimming hard in clouds of turbulence
Turning blue from their ignorance The silence is just too loud to escape The mist looks calm and innocent Clouds in the ether Filled with suicidal life rings What do you cling to The mist wraps thoughts around your brain All desire and hope it starts to drain Choking wisps of madness comes The numbness driving you insane Clouds in the ether Filled with suicidal life rings What do you cling to Swimming on in clouds and mist Swirling waves of insanity kissed Clinging to that one last hope That when your gone you will be missed
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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12-11-2003, 09:26 PM
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WOW, awesome, Linda!!!! That paints quite a picture in my mind. Well done!
Love this part: Clouds in the ether Filled with suicidal life rings What do you cling to
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Good stuff, Linda! Good to see you posting!! Keep it up!
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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very good
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Linda, AWESOME!! So glad you decided to share with us!
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Thanks.... I know, I never share this stuff. It's because I don't like the way I write. I do read everyone elses. I may not post, but I do read it. Some very very talented people around here.
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eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..." |
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12-12-2003, 03:28 PM
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Like You...
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Exactly!!!
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Yeah! Nicely done, very deep!
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Awesome poem, Linda!!
 It's very powerful. I'm happy you decided to share it with us. 
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