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Eternal Regret
prophets of old
spoke of this day how these chains would be freed this bondage loosened i saw him walk on water but he couldn't stop herod's hateful spear from plunging into his fragile side the world is at war waterloo and armageddon are at hand that snake taking of the fruit his blood cries out from the ground his merchants with their worthless laws keep the chains wrapped around their halos now choking them their prayers of pride now condeming them i was never the one whom he loved he told me that bird would laugh at me that simple fisherman this day shall be a hero today or at least i thought so how could you be up on that tree don't you see what i gave up with that apple did i choke on a lie? where are the legions to save my soul? i caught fish and he caught men but who will catch them? his body broken like that of unleavened bread blood and water like darkness and light i wasen't there for him it was me who put that spear that spear into his side i hear my voice calling out mocking him so like napoelon i can't see past the fosty haze how could blood free me snatching victory from the jaws of defeat Lord never again shall I leave your side |
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04-12-2004, 11:18 AM
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Wow, that was a really GREAT poem, hmd. Thanks for sharing.
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Awesome job, hide...
I love this verse: his merchants with their worthless laws keep the chains wrapped around their halos now choking them their prayers of pride now condeming them
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thanks i'm glad you guys enjoyed it, haven't written anything for a couple of months prior to this. easter got me thinking........
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yes i Loved It I always find your stuff soul inspiring,,,,ROCK ON
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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thanks sis next time i'm really pissed i'll write something angry and maybe it won't be so inspiring.  |
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yes yes Dogstar thats the verse that i found so soul inspiring,, Whoooooooooo
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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