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01-16-2006, 11:37 PM
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Uncertain Drummer version 2
hey I was just wondering if uncertainn drummer sees this if he can critique my last few lyrics posted being that he is an expert. Oh and anyone else is welcome to critique.
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01-17-2006, 02:16 AM
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Re: Uncertain Drummer version 2
Hey... uncertaindrumer is offline since last december. But I think when hes back to CF he certainly will make an accurate analysis not only of your lyrics though...  So...be patient! PS: Uncertain now is the subject of a thread...Gosh ...this guy became really famous!!!!! lol
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So while I'm turning in my sheets And once again, I cannot sleep Walk out the door and up the street Look at the stars Look at the stars, falling down, And I wonder where, did I go wrong. "I know a girl (Gio  )She puts the color inside of my world" Girls become lovers who turn into mothers So mothers be good to your daughters too Last edited by Ana4Stapp : 01-17-2006 at 02:48 AM. |
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