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Hi guys.

This is a little bit as a comeback for me on the Creative Corner part. Some of you might have read this, but you are few. But enjoy it.

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Originally Posted by Shine

Shine
If I had just one wish
Should I live without this?
You're gone and no one knows how I feel
Can't really understand that this is for real
You've spened your time way too young
Where do I now belong?

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight...

Time lives another life
Times never cries
Never thought earth lied
Where were life when you died?
No else is here but me
Now you're gone, I know it will be difficult to see

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight
And you know you gave me light
Of the kind that will always shine

Is there any way I can make you proud?
Please don't scream out loud
Try to live your life on your end
And I will try to move on, my friend
But I know you'll make it back someday
To watch me if I'm okay
I wish I could take you by the hand
And tell you how I feel so you could understand
Gotta keep breathing now
And carry on with life somehow
It's cold here where you left me
I know things won't get better, things will never be...
So now I can choose to live or go with you
Whatever I choose it's because I love you

There's many things we've been through
Broken hearts but apologizes way too few
How shall I carry on without you?
I'm so sorry, I wish I could see you tonight
And you know you gave me light
Of the kind that will always shine

Peace, Lith

;) Im Breathless Really!!!!!

Well, thank you... I don't really like it that much, but everybody else seems to do.

Everybody likes poems about unrequited love cuz we've all been there once or twice. Lith, I just thought of something, since English is not your first language (or is it?) do you write your words and then translate them for us?

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Originally Posted by Aimee

No, English is not my first language, but I'm very good at it for my age. (I'm 15). And I'm from Sweden, so I speak Swedish, dear. ;) And no, I do not translate it for you, I write in English. Don't know why, it just feels right.

What did you think of the lyric anyway?

This one's the one that made me cry! It hits me... :crying:

I liked the last bit best (before the chorus) Lith.

:crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying: :crying:

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman

This one's the one that made me cry! It hits me... :crying:

Calm down guys... It's just me, I've wrote it.

Sis, I'm just a bratt, huh? I'm just 15 ;)

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM

Calm down guys... It's just me, I've wrote it.

Sis, I'm just a bratt, huh? I'm just 15 ;)

:scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared:

Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM

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Originally Posted by WeatheredWoman

:scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared: :scared:

Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM Bratt-ALARM

I Will Take Cover ;)

Run, hide...

but Don't follow me... I'm lost too :nut:

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Originally Posted by extreme_LITHIUM

Run, hide...

but Don't follow me... I'm lost too :nut:

Hey I Know It!!!!!! :D hehehe

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Originally Posted by creedsister

Hey I Know It!!!!!! :D hehehe

It's taken from Stef's siggy.