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Eternity
This is a new style of writing for me. I hope you like it though :D
Eternity Is this where it ends Alone here with out any friends? Is this where is began Here in this forgotten land? I cant remember who I am or where I came from I could go to the hill top and cry out my broken anthem But what would that do? Im still alone here without you I could sing the greatest song you would ever hear,but I'd still be alone I could write the greatest lyrics in history,but that still wouldnt get me Home Im not sure just why Im really here But every now and then I can hear someone whisper into my ear Im not sure just what life is all about But I can feel an arm around me,and I know that without a doubt Im lost and I dont know why Why I cry, why I try, or even why I die I live my life not knowing what to do Not knowing Im supposed to be chasing after You Dont be scared of what you do not know Just do what I tell you and take things slow You'll soon see that I have a plan for you I will make your dead body alive and brand new Instead I go on living this meaningless life Seeing nothing that was planned for me,I chose to take the knife To take the knife,to dig deep,to be blinded like little sheep Among the wolves,for Im their prey,devour me while Im asleep And leave my corpse for the fowl of the air For I will be in their care I am just a body,a souless shell To be taken to my home,to my Hell The ghost and demons afraid of the light Will take my soul in the dead of night They look so beautiful as they soar through the sky They dance like angels that were denied The hope,that they may one day live They pour out my blood for its the only thing I have left to give They drink of my flesh like the beast's they are Pour me into cups to drink as if Im to be loved from a far Make a toast to the formal me For being so sweet and so tasty It makes me sick to see them rip me apart To take out my organs and then rip out my heart I still wonder if I ever made it Home I guess I died here so cold and so alone I always kind of knew that I was going to Hell I just didnt care to think much about it untill I ended up there The flames,they carry me down Hear pain and sorrow,you can feel it all around Eternity means forever,there is no end to this My cries cant end it neither can my shaking fist A thousand years damned already feels like the end But this is just the beginning says my fallen angel friend Eternity means forever,there is no end to this. |
KILLLER SEEKS i really lOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOved That One !!!!!
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Thanks alot Ta! :D
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Whoah, awesome. This one is even better then Crimson Fate! I like this new style and just hope the poem I just posted isn't too much like this b/c I wrote it before I even read this. AWESOME! And it's so true too if you avoid doing what you should be. Thanks for writing that! ;)
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Thanks alot Kim! :D Better then Crismon Fate? I dont know about that,hehe.
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BTW, this will be the last of my writings being posted. If you want to read my future ones,join my newsletter. Just PM saying you want to be part of it. Thanks :D
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awesome
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Thanks alot Dan :D
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