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Untouchable Abiding in the stillness of the expectation worth the wait Hiding in the thought of their world without hate Patience paying of with the fruit of happiness and peace But words from the vine so close trying to kill, never will they cease Just leave them alone! I think you want what they have obtained Looking inside you see a core that once was pure but now is stained Fragile is the balance between care and control In trying to repair you brake what is already hole Just look at what they have as they become one! Something untouchable that can be taken by no one What we have found is peace so just leave us alone Still not seeing a new joy in our eyes we conclude inside you’ve become stone The soul you are barely holding on to is fading to dust One thing Ill tell you is already lost is our respect and trust We don’t care what you think so just leave us hear Where we can live in peace and not feed on this fear You’ve tried to take the best of us so we’re telling you to leave Maybe somewhere in time we can escape to a place where someone will believe Lord God does anyone Believe?!?! |
I believe, I believe! That was awesome Sam but then again you never disappoint. ;) Haven't seen you lately. Keep posting your poems they are always good!
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Hello Sam, :)
This is a very well written poem. I love the imagery, conviction of your emotions and the flow. I do believe, one day, we will live in peace and without fear. Very good poem. I hope to read more from you!! ~Honey~ ;) |
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