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inside_us_all04 04-24-2008 04:44 AM

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I just want everything to go away
all the stress that fuels my day
anxiety running high i have no where to hide
just close my door and turn on the music
and hide away in my bed all day
i have no where else to turn
i dont think anyone understands how i feel
and they dont care how i do here anyways

alone i hide
broken deep inside
everythings a mess
and i cant cope
somedays i swear theirs no hope

arguments and confrontation
everythings a mess
and i cant seem to fix myself
let alone anyone else
and i just want to escape
i just want to find a place where i belond
cuz im broken and dont know what to do
dont know where i belong where i will succeed

alone i hide
broken deep down inside
and i cant cope
somedays i swear theirs no hope

just want to belong
just want everything to be okay
for tomorows sake i hope it will

nagpo 04-24-2008 05:14 PM

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I really connected with that. Thanks, man.

TrulyAmazing 04-26-2008 11:59 AM

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indeed from many prespectives and view points everybody can relate too GLORY reminds me of the thoughts in the night Psalms 4,1,8

Dogstar 04-26-2008 10:20 PM

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Wow, very emotional. Nice job.

TrulyAmazing 05-29-2008 08:46 PM

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Dogstar
Wow, very emotional. Nice job.

indeed Dog Indeed :) Kerri Not Only is one of our great writers Her Ya.lls But shes the best critc too


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