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To Mark Tremonti
Tremonti
You are torn Wash away this peace Move your fingers on the neck of SE Seek and you'll find the mystery Sing now man Play now with it meanly Move your mountains Keep your hands upon the wheel Keep focused You are the meek who holds it all inside You are with me You are free Not filthy Love, don't be torn Forgive yourself from all those prophecies Forget about the thorns on your side Sing your love song man Let us hear your sweet lullaby You are the peace inside us all Keep on playing baby You're a legend You are a warrior The freedom fighter who doesn't have a reason to hide from the bullets of the Faceless Man At my last breath I'll say I love you Man |
Wow..
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That's good! :)
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Hello,
Very well written!! I was mesmerized by the flow and imagery. Beautifully expressed poem!! ~Hestla's Honey~:) |
Humm...Sounds a littel bitt like my "Creed Lyrics Medely"....But mine are MUCH longer!!
Acctully I think that my have a better story... Here it is: (Torn) Peace is what they tell me Love am I unholy Lies are what they tell me-- (Say I) Out forms this misconception we call man But I don’t know him No, I don’t know him Because he lies-- (One) I feel angry I feel helpless Want to change the world, yeah I feel violent I feel alone Don’t try and change my mind-- (What’s This Life For?) But they ain’t here anymore Don’t have to settle the score ’Cause we all live Under the reign of one king-- (Is This The End?) So look to the sky He hold the keys for your life and mine-- (My Own Prison) So I cry out to God Seeking only his decision Gabriel stands and confirms I’ve created my own prison-- (Weathered) So now I’m rusted and weathered Barely holding together I’m covered with skin that peels and it just won’t heal-- (Wrong Way) And they all told me the wrong way What if I died? What did I give? (What If?) What if you did? What if you lied? What if I avenge? What if eye for an eye?-- (Who’s Got My Back?) So who’s got my back now? When all we have left is deceptive So disconnected So what is the truth now?-- (Bound And Tied) Bound and tied, Bound and tied I’m bound and tied I’m bound and tied-- (My Own) But I’m gona get out So are you with me?-- (What If?) ’Cause we are one, we are strong The more they hold us down the more we press on-- (Signs) So come with me I’m fading Underneath the lights Come with me Come with me Come with me now-- (Freedom Fighter) ’Cause I’m just a freedom fighter No remorse Raging on in holy war Soon there’ll come a day When you’re face to face with me Face to face with me-- (Bullets) And hey all I want is what’s real Something I touch and can feel I’ll hold it close and never let it go Said why... why do we live life With all this hate inside I’ll give it away ’cause I don’t want it no more Please help me find a place Somewhere far away I’ll go and you’ll never see me again-- (Beautiful) So close your eyes, here’s your surprise-- (Hide) Let’s leave…oh let’s get away Get lost in time Where there’s no reason to hide Let’s leave…oh let’s get away Run in fields of time Where there’s no reason to hide-- (Don’t Stop Dacning) So am I hiding in the shadows? Forget the pain and forget the sorrows But I know I must go on Although I hurt I must be strong Because inside I know that many Feel this way-- (Are You Ready?) So are you ready? Are you ready? For what’s to come All I say: ”Are you ready? Are you ready?” For what’s to come-- (Inside Us All) ’Cause there’s a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on in the end There’s a peace inside us all-- (Signs) And can’t you see them? See the signs You see them All the signs we see them Can’t you see them?-- (My Own) And if you see them See the signs, do you see them? So if you see them you know what we will do then Come on, I see them, see the signs you see them Let's get out, we already see the signs, we see them (Higher) So let’s go there Let’s make our escape Come on, let’s go there Let’s ask can we stay? Can you take me higher? To the place where blind men see Can you take me higher? To the place with golden streets-- (Stand Here With Me) ’Cause you stand here with me-- (My Sacrifice) And when you are with me I’m free…I’m careless…I believe Above all the others we’ll fly This brings tears to my eyes My sacrifice-- (Higher) So let's go there Let's go there Come on lets go there Let ask can we stay? Up high I feel like I’m alive for the very first time Up high I’m strong enough to take these dreams And make them mine-- (With Arms Wide Open) And when we get there I’ll show you love I’ll show you everything With arms wide open Under the sunlight We’ll go to that place I’ll show you everything With arms wide open Now everything has changed I’ll show you love I’ll show you everything With arms wide open-- (Lullabay) And if there’s one thing I hope I showed you Hope I showed you Just give love to all I know there’s one thing that You showed me That you showed me Just give love to all Let’s give love to all-- (Torn) Lies are what they told me... |
i was gonna say my jaw hit the floor when i saw how long that was.....but it kept going and it's still dropping lol
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Great poem, Hotdoggie!:D It was very expressive and stirred up emotions in me, well done.:clap:
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lithium, wot was the point of that?
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thank u guys for ur opinions! i'm sorry i haven't written in a LONG time but i had to travel to see my mother and sister...
extreme lithium i just wanted to say that ur poem is actually bits and pieces of all the creed songs, it is true that i took some lyrics myself but it was only to amplify my passion for the creed songs. So what i advise you to do is start writing how you feel about the creed songs instead of taking them entirely... please don't take this the wrong way but it's just that you seem to have an inspiration, a gift for writing.... |
Cool poem Hotdoggie.
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Thats what I was wondering:confused: Great poem Hot doggie:dancing: :dancing: |
That was a very good poem hotdoggie. Thank you for sharing.
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