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aussiecreeder 07-17-2005 10:39 AM

Those Eyes
 
I swear I'm not this bleak lol but this is what came out for whatever reason......

Little boy starting at me
With big eyes so blue
Those eyes shall soon match your mood

You'll give up looking for the "one"
And marry the first one that comes along
Sure she's beautiful now
But just wait to she places a ring on your finger
And she lets herself go
Karma Sutra you'll be a master
But forget how to make love

You'll work your ass off
Earn two degrees
Only to find yourself with a job and boss you depise
Hating every second just to feed your kids and wife

You'll get somewhere, buy a house or two
One of the kids hit college and perhaps things aren't so bad after all
One day you'll find her with the pizza delivery man
And break your heart in two

She'll take you for half your worth
And take those kids
You love more than life itself
If you're lucky you'll see them on weekends

Child support will fund your wife's loser husband
His three kids
You'll die a lonely man
Your inheritance spent on your daughter's husband
With no job who placed that bruise on her eye

What are you waiting for?
A happy ending?
This is not Hollywood son

creedsister 07-17-2005 04:04 PM

:D thats the truth so help me Lord ... :D beautiful insparation :D SO PRECIOUS DIVINE :D

Ann Allusion 07-17-2005 08:10 PM

May not be hollywood, son...but in REAL LIFE we can change the script, nothing's written in stone...just takes a little longer to rewrite... ;)

excellent observation piece...enjoyed reading it... :D

creedsister 07-18-2005 02:17 AM

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa:d


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