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RoffeDH 11-02-2005 09:43 PM

Falling down drowning
 
The man down the street never had a friend
He never sought to feel a hand
This night he just lingers down that bridge
Never to look back at what he might have been
He's wounded and desperate to take his life

Never looking back
Just letting go
Falling down from that road
And he's lost in the sea
Drowning for a couse
Never to bother you again

Did you ever try to feel if he was okey
Can you live with yourself
Where did it all go so wrong
Always holding on to what you belive is dear
But what if you were wrong and he were right

Never looking back
Just letting go
Falling down from that road
And you're lost in the sea
Drowning for a couse
Never to see the light again

Did you stick you're head in the sand
To see the darknes surrounding you
Makeing it all go away
So that you can say
"It wasn't me that made this mess"

Rocketqueen 11-02-2005 10:53 PM

welcome haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa :punk2: very interesting i feel a path thats on a way street with no rights or any lefts and being stopped along that path to do what is right for another person but there is a stronger being in front of that path that is willing to give up what they believe from a human natured point of you to do was it right for that person the stronger being in front is searched over and over again for the sake of was right tied to it the other being on this path is willing and in weakness stregnth subsides its seems like a game of tug and war up on 2 heart of diamonds for the sake of inocent like the lifeless being that is portrayed in this wrting that could be fact or fiction but somewhere there is a man down the street never had a friend he never sought to feel a hand the night lingers down the bridge never to look back at what he might a been hes wounded and desprate to take his life and it brings to mind the parable from matt and mark if ye had 100 sheep and one of theme would go estray the right thing todo is leave the 99 and got get the one that is lost im sorry for such a long reply fouturne telling runs in my jeans ;) Beautiful work thanks for sharing

RoffeDH 11-03-2005 01:30 PM

Wow... What a long sentenc! ;)
The last bit was the best couse the rest I hardly understood...

But okey ;) That's your interpertation of it ;),
Thanks!

Rocketqueen 11-03-2005 05:01 PM

:) your very much welcome


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