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Rulesdontapply 01-14-2005 04:16 PM

Our Long Goodbyes
 
Hiding in the summer breeze with you

Letting it take us where it will

Running in the night under the stars

Bare feet across the warm grass

Until we lay in the still holding hands

Afraid to let go

Not wanting you to get away from me

And then that breeze caught your hair

Playing with it in the wind

A backdrop to your beautiful eyes

Hiding your beautiful lies

Camouflaged by your beautiful smile

And I still miss the taste of that smile

But I wont let you take me where you will

Your lingering goodbyes still kill

They still pull at my heart

And they are still tearing me apart

The memories of who we were

And the reality of who you made me

More then I used to be

But before you took it back again

And its not how it was back then



And I will always keep a summer night for you

I’ll run in the breeze with the thoughts of you

And remember your smile and its taste

One that now tastes of other peoples lips

And the stars that played in your eyes

And ill forget the lies

Just to be with you awhile

To feel your smile

And look in your eyes

Forgetting the long goodbyes

Forgetting our goodbye

HR2004 01-14-2005 04:21 PM

Great visual that was awesome!

creedsister 01-14-2005 10:17 PM

that was awsome *** :jam: :jam:

cjme 01-14-2005 11:39 PM

That was most beautiful. Very moving and very personal. Thanks for sharing this.

Anna1011 02-03-2005 02:22 PM

aw that was soo nice, really personal and moving

PaulMcCoygirl 03-01-2005 04:15 PM

That was good!

creedsister 09-03-2005 12:20 PM

:d


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