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Like A Dog I Return
Shrinking violet oh so strangely verbose
Even though you've done this to me Like a dog I return I can't quite figure out why So tired of this manna Return me to my slavish depravity Chorus Can't quite fill the hole Smile at the thought of you The music we made My juxtaposed lover Your yoke on the floor Ruminate my flowers bought your soul Your lips planted in my head So ravenous Verse 2 Baby I loved you, offered up All but my life Gaze into those big blue eyes Totally oblivious to the smoke in mine There was a day oh so long ago When you were a harmless sin Now with my conscience awakened What someone knows? Darkness chokes my soul One bullet at a time |
:) :clap: :clap: Now Thats Some Kick Ass Writing You Gotta It GOING ONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN :jam:
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:clap:...nicely done...:)
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thanks....:)
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Wicked cool, hide. Nice job...
Loooooved this part: Ruminate my flowers bought your soul Your lips planted in my head So ravenous |
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thanks and this one took a bit more work then other ones i've written. if only i could play guitar much better and sing much better lol. |
I'd be happy to be able to PLAY the guitar...some day...
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that was awesome
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i'm learning but i'm not very good lol |
Ooh I found one! :D
Wow, that was really good, reminds me a little of PJ's Garden. Well done! |
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thanks :)......garden? ummm haden't thought of that. i do a bit of a debt to maynard james keenan of a perfect circle for the general theme of the song though. |
Yeah just a little like Garden, but it's probably how I interpret that song, it's very personal to me. The "Like a dog I return" line, especially.
But seriously well done it was great |
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thanks i appreciate it! :) the like a dog line reminds me a bit of the temple of a dog song titled "like a dog" stangely enough although i can't remember if it was thinking of that song at the time. |
Funny that :D
And yeah it would be great if you could write some more :) |
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