Remembrance of a Feeling
 

Hello God
Are you listening to this child to?

Tell me
Are my sinful act reaching you?
Have the heavens above steered me astray?

Have my shameful, sinful actions a price to pay?

Because I feel nothing, not today
No remorse or faith inside is left alive

And I remember you...
The feeling of a son in the sky
The lies inside a book
I dare not defy
The feeling of purpose in my mind

Now I have to say...
The reason for this prayer tonight
I'm feeling next to nothing, all right?
And I know it's been a long journey
Oh how these sins I've had to carry
All I feel is guilty

Oh I dare feel nothing
No regret, no remorse and no shame
But I do feel pain
I'm feeling guilty because
I know I should feel something
I know I should feel something

So please excuse this pain
End it all or something
Make it all worth something
Cause it's the end
And I'm traveling on to my end
With no friend

Re: Remembrance of a Feeling
 

i,ve been so busy i have,nt had time to read anybodys stuff and so forth but im so into this one, because i feel nothing today no remorse or faith inside is left alive and i remembear you the feeling of the son in the sky the lies inside a book i dare not defy the feeling of purpose of in my mind as long as the purpose burns strong in brief it reminds me of this what man will not see or hear not in time will be taken from the earth as one said he would but the purpose is is to store that what we remembered in hearts body mind and soul where rust and decay will not destroy and the thief cant rob it therof for its in hearts and soul and mind and will indeed depart from us not :thumbsup: great job nagpo ...........:jam:

Re: Remembrance of a Feeling
 

Thanks! Make sure to check out my other one. I'm proud of it the most.

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i,ll get right on it :rockon:

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those are awsome im always looking for new ideas and so forth.

Re: Remembrance of a Feeling
 

this one of nagpo,s in brief reminds me of Ace frehelys lost in limbo, as well along with my other opinon potery can be healing if we reach out and revisted.