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Dogstar 02-09-2006 06:26 AM

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A bit of a rant...:D

I take you in
Under my skin
Desperate to win
Tricked yet again

You make your move
You're so damn smooth
Again I slip
I'm in your grip

Whisper in my ear
The line you think I need to hear
Just once I'd like to see
What the fuck you've done for me

It's all the same
This endless game
You call my name
My will you maim

You're spinning gold
I'm shaking cold
Your lies so bold
My soul is sold

Whisper in my ear
The line you think will feed my fear
Just once I'd like to be
The one to serve up misery

TeriB19 02-09-2006 08:53 AM

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Wow, that is both powerful and very moving, Kerri.

Dogstar 02-09-2006 02:57 PM

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Thank you, Teri :)

Rocketqueen 02-11-2006 12:00 AM

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Doggy you serve it well The Poem i take you under my skin:) desprate to win you make your move your so damn smooth its all the same this endless game you call my name Maim :) whisper in my ear the line you think i need to hear, KICK ASS :jam: :jam: i know title for this one damn it i cant spell it,

Dogstar 02-11-2006 12:49 AM

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Hehe, thank you, Rocketqueen :D. So nice to see you back!!!!

Rocketqueen 02-11-2006 12:51 AM

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thanks Doggy


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