Fresh
 

By: Amy Aumick 2004

I can feel my skin
As it never was before
Connected to my mind
Refreshed by years
Of Pain.
No longer bound by law
Or love.
No longer ashamed.
Live Bright!
Live Quick!
Do not be afraid,
I say.

Bravo!! Bravo!! Good for you, great poem!!! :clap: :clap: :clap:

perfect Aim
 

Haha I Can Feel My Skin Never Before Conneted To My Mind, No Longer Bound By Law!! Yes I Can Relate To All Of Those Things, My Thoughts SomeTimes When We Run Out Of Room And Need Something Fresh. Sometimes Were Afraid To Let The Deep Stuff Out b/c Were :o But When u Have Growed So Fast. U Run Out Room. And Even The Bold Sometimes Must Learn To Be Bolder. Say I I Always love Ur Stuff Aim Today I Would. Like To Say Thank You :) :)