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HR2004 04-28-2005 11:21 PM

untitled
 
Surronded In this torment...
All the time spent...
You need to repent...
For you I have an endless resent...
But that was your intent...
Was it your purpose to cause all this pain...
I am withering away...
And yet you having nothing more to say...
Oh but today...
I saw the real you...
I see the crulety you possess...
Its endless...
So fresh...
On the surface of those cold blooded eyes...
You surprised...
I figured you out...
You I disprise...
So much hate inside...
No room left to hide it away...
For now you must pay...
For who are you too try this...
I was your friend...
You betrayed me...
I wished I knew to stay away...
But what has happened is happened...
But what must be done now...
Has to be done...
Believe me this isnt fun...
I'm tried of your games...
No time for play...
Just come out and display...
All the lies you must wear...
All the pain thats on your shoulders...
Tell me does it weigh a ton...
Oh the depth of your deception...
A long way to crawl back out of...
But you put yourself in their...
Now you must find a way out...
Stuck in the mud...
A puddle full of blood...
This is what you cause...
The pain of all you claim to love...
But whats that worth nothing anymore...
And you say I have destroyed you...
That this is all my doing...
How dare you even utter that sound...
Pin your anger and hate on me...
Makeing me out to be...
Alone and blamed...
Not this time I dont think so...
You now are my foe...
Friends nevermore...

creedsister 04-28-2005 11:58 PM

:) that was AWSOME :jam: :jam: :jam: :jam: :: Really I Would Have Called It , Searching For Fears :) AWSOME

Ann Allusion 04-29-2005 10:50 AM

once again, quite emotional, HR...
as for a title..."Puddle of Blood"...could work as a title...your play on "Puddle of Mud" was a good touch... ;)

:rockon:

HR2004 04-29-2005 11:14 AM

Thanks you guys alot I appreciate it!I know this one was really emotional I was very upset as you can tell thanks for the title ideas they both are awesome!


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