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Open Your Eyes
I wrote this probably in January or Febuary this year, it's kinda funny that Open Your Eyes is what I named it. Then a few weeks ago I was flipping through my poems, and I had forgotten about this one, I said to myself, ha, that's weird that I named it Open Your Eyes, I never would have guessed that's what AB's first single would be titled. Maybe it was some kind of sixth sense between a fan and the band. ;) :D :eek: Okay, here it is.....
Lost yourself, pityless actions You stand before a broken mirror What you see is so unclear Life is so unclear Your eyes are blind, your life my cost Because this, my respect you've lost The world is gray, pills brighten your day All this childish play, I hate your ways You're not the one I used to know The real you lacks to show I stand aside, and see your life And everytime I ask why Your soul is stained Life's gone crushed Anymore, it's all too much I wait, wait for the day when this'll change But I'm not going to wait my life away Stand before your mirror Reflection unclear Is stupidity done for love Maybe from above I hope someday you'll find You can see if you just open those eyes Because you did this Because we didn't Because she made a difference A love you feel ever so lighter A love I used to feel Maybe over the days We come back together Or we grow apart Whatever happens, I know in my heart That what was done is done And I hope someday you'll think a different way Okay people, if you really care about friendship and your friends, DON'T DO DRUGS!!!!!!!!! It breaks friendships! |
that what was done is done i happen to liked it made me feel better, :D saxon
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Thanks Sis, it really wasn't that good a poem, but it helped releive some stress, and that's a good thing about poems, they're healthy!
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Creed_Defaultgirl...awesome poem. I can feel your anguish, anger and pity all at the same time. Well done!
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Thanks Kerri, and yet another late night! LOL Wow, for you it's about 3 am, hmm, makes me think of a matchbox20 song! I should probably hit the sack though, I've got to get up too early, and it's definantly early if it's before 10:00, so I'm gone. Peace out as Jagger says, Rock on as Scott :wub: says, see you guys later as I say.... :)
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Hahahah, yep, here we are once again :D...You have a good one, Creed_Defaultgirl! Sweet dreams!
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