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MrSeeker 10-12-2004 10:57 PM

For The Love of A Murderer
 
For The Love of A Murderer

My world, my life, my everything
Has burned to ashes and they smolder
A pile of good intent and promises unfulfilled
Lay beneath my feet
And I mourn

And all I wanted was that one simple touch
Just one more memory I could lay to waste and forget
One last smile to tug at my heart and then rip it out
Leaving bloodstains and no room to explain
I don't need another empty promise again
You were full of them and I was full of love
That I no longer have the courage to give out
Because of all that you let me believe
But now,I continue to grieve through it all
My love has past and that cold is finally burning me.

Ann Allusion 10-12-2004 11:26 PM

nice to see you again Mr. Seeker....very emotional as always, enjoyed reading it...and this line:

My love has past and that cold is finally burning me.

that has to be the loneliest feeling that could ever befall any human being...but, by the same token...love can heal those burns as well... :)

creedsister 10-13-2004 01:16 AM

:samurai: LOVED IT :jam: :jam:

MrSeeker 10-15-2004 03:56 AM

Why thank you. :D Love is a tricky thing sometimes. Some times it really does burn, other times it makes you feel so good. Yerp, tricky.

creedsister 10-15-2004 11:53 AM

:rockon:
Quote:

Originally Posted by MrSeeker
Why thank you. :D Love is a tricky thing sometimes. Some times it really does burn, other times it makes you feel so good. Yerp, tricky.



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