Like Vapour
 

Forty, male, white and middle class
In my lifetime trials I will pass
Worship at the altar of ease
And pleasure oh what a beautiful young lover is she

Can't stand the clanging silence
My thoughts drive me to these pills
Yellow for up and Orange for down
Live under the sun

But now I look back
Oh the past was so much better
The only figures higher than my account
Are the regrets and these calories

I am like grass
Which tomorrow is gone
If I'm lucky they'll remember my name
Worked these frail hands to the bone
Half for my hopeless son to score a cone
And the remainder for the genes he has never seen

Wish I knew at birth that death is greater
That the end is better than the beginning
Because of all these passions and vapour
No laughter.....only sorrow

:roll: Wish i knew at birth that death is Greater, it was cool, i know it was kinda serisous, but it hit me funny,

glad its funny although it wasen't really meant to be. if you dig it, it doesn't bother me why.

:) I Know It, Was,ent It Just Hit Me Funny, A Lot Of Stuff Does, I That Normal Folk Would Not Find Funny, But Oh Well, I Liked It :)

nice writing, aussie...there are some sections in there that i find humourous as well, and others that take on a serious tone...but then isn't that what living life is?....a mixture of both humourous and serious..as well as good and bad...and in the end...all balancing out if we've done it right?...again, liked it... :)

:jam: :jam:

good writting

thanks everyone.....:)