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If Time Stood Still
If Time Stood Still
If time stood still would you wait for me? In a field of flowers By an old oak tree…. Wind in your hair… Blowin’ wild and free Warmed by the sun Would you wait for me? If time stood still would you wait for me? Hold in your heart Old memories… Of times gone by And times to be See me in dreams… Would you wait for me? Would you move mountains Search endlessly Do you think you’d know me? See thru my transparencies If time stood still would you wait for me? Alas, it can’t That’s absurdity… Yet, Anything’s possible When we believe Miracles happen Would you wait for me? ©2004 Susan D. just one of those things that wrote it's self again...hope y'all enjoy... :) ~peace |
That was Soul touching Like A Quiet whisper Ann, Would you move , mountains search endlessly DO YOU THINK YOU,D KNOW ME THRU MY TRANSPARENCIES :thumbsup:
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thank you for reading, creedsister...sometimes more can be said with a whisper than with a shout...;)
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oh i know :smokin:
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Love that one, Ann...this is my favorite part.
Would you move mountains Search endlessly Do you think you’d know me? See thru my transparencies I don't know if I'm on target with my little interpretation, but that verse makes me think of a bigger implication: Am I worthy? I like words that make me think. |
Very good poem Ann Allusion:)
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thank you for your kind replies and for reading this piece....glad y'all enjoyed it... :)
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awesome like it
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