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HR2004 04-04-2005 11:35 PM

Dead end
 
A strong passion...
Nothing wrong with that...
Pondering on it...
These feelings I harbor...
A strong passion...
Scares me to death...
Knowing every book has an ending...
Aware nothing last...
Having the understanding...
That there will be times...
When I fall and you wont be there to catch me...
Having that knowlege kills me...
A part of me dies...
Everytime...
Some people dont want to acknowledge...
The fact that forever isn't for a while...
But me...
I'm stuck accepting it...
Falling for you so hard...
The air you breath is sweet...
The depth of whats happening to me...
So deep...
Not knowing if your down there with me...
Strikes fear in my heart...
Everything has an stopping point...
Theres always an ending...
is this a dead end...
A passion so strong...
Too strong...
I dont want another promise...
I need a guarentee...
What do you want...
I cant be just another episode in your life...
That would hurt so bad...
Make me believe we could always be friends...
Even when its over...
But how can I ask that much...
Selfish I guess...
Tired of searching for something greater...
I want this to last...
Not like the things of the past...
Demanding a great deal...
I know...
I understand if you say you have too go...
But are you leading me on the path of forever...
Or to the dead end...

creedsister 04-05-2005 12:34 AM

Well Written :jam: :jam: :jam: :) i liked it

Ann Allusion 04-05-2005 09:09 AM

Quote:

I understand if you say you have too go...
But are you leading me on the path of forever...
Or to the dead end...

like that part...enjoyed reading the whole piece...emotional...:rockon:

creedsister 04-05-2005 12:38 PM

oh my favorite was...........some people dont want to ackknowlege the fact that forever is,nt for a while but me im stuck accepting it :) :jam: :jam: :jam: Keeeeeeeeeeeeeel :smokin:

HR2004 04-05-2005 02:31 PM

Thank you both very much I enjoyed writting it and Im glad you have favorite parts!!Thanks again

creedsister 04-05-2005 05:23 PM

Your Welcome :jam: :jam:

Ann Allusion 04-06-2005 11:00 AM

ditto...:rockon:

Dogstar 04-10-2005 08:01 PM

Nice job, HR...
This is my favorite part:

Tired of searching for something greater...
I want this to last...
Not like the things of the past...
Demanding a great deal...
I know...

HR2004 04-11-2005 04:29 PM

thank you very much!


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