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Till you showed me original live acoustic song
Hello all,
I have recorded a song live on a webcam and uploaded to youtube. I would really appreciate feedback http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FQpnzK3W9ws Verse 1: My down state of mind Led me to lead my life blind To seeing what this life could be But I was down and lost I had fallen too far I can't believe that this was me Pre-Chorus Happiness had left my eyes Depression had surrounded my mind Chorus And I............ was near the edge of giving up Till you......... showed me, what this life could be But I couldn't see any point to my life I thought life would just pass me by Till you showed me........ Verse 2 My demons are laid to rest to better myself I once feared what this life would be And now my minds so clear Inside there's no fear I've left bedind what was once me Pre-Chorus 2 Depression has left my eyes Happiness now surrounds my mind Chorus - Other section Please believe me when I say these words Don't doubt me when I tell you this Acoustic Chorus 2 My down state of mind Led me to lead my life blind To seeing what this life could be And I was near the edge of giving up Till you showed me who I could be Chorus - Ending Till you showed me, |
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